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« on: December 06, 2006, 10:21:25 AM »

As she gazes up into the midnight sky her heart pounded.
Deeper and deeper it rung in her ears not knowing.
It all seems so far away, but still yet so close.
The fregrance of distant worlds linger on the tip of her nose.
She tries to fly to them distant worlds.
But her wings will not spread and she draws up unwilling.
The love she once knew has been stolen.
"Maybe her love is in another's world," she thinks.
Again she tries to fly and again she fails.

Her legs are now planted in the ground like long roots
looking for water to quench their thirst.
While spreading her arms wide once again she sighs.
It's no use, she will never be free of bondage, her love, or
her world.

Tears slowly runs down from both her eyes, down her cheeks.
Only to meet at the tip of her chin, to drop onto her bossom.
The salty wet soaks through her torn garment touching her
pearl skin.
It seeps into her blood like a raging river into the ocean.

Red blood flows through her like a tidal waving carrying her
tears to her heart and soul.
And with that she can finally rest in peace.
Fading away with her love into extinction.
With no one to ever to know her or their love forever.





If you have a poem you wrote please post it hear.
For anyone that reads other member's poems, PLEASE DO NOT steal another's work for personal use unless that person gives permission. Ok? But you are allowed post your comments on the poems you read.
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Don't walk in front of me,
I might not follow.
Don't walk behind me,
I might not lead.
Walk beside me and be my friend.

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« Reply #1 on: December 07, 2006, 05:19:20 AM »

I liked it much it was great.Did you ever think to take poetry seriously?
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The lord of water spoke
In the silence
Words of wisdom
I've seen the end of all
Be aware the storm gets closer
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« Reply #2 on: December 07, 2006, 11:00:25 AM »

Not really. I have more I have wrote and even won an editors choice award for one. I spend my writting(sp) time working on my book that I have been doing for three years now.

Thanks for your kind words Nume. They were sweet.
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« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2006, 09:17:41 AM »

*Ahem* 'Ello mom.

Beyond the Fence

A howl in the distance
a scream in the night
your average horror film, right?

Beyond the fence
there is no light
Yet everything seems to tower above your hight

Drounding in your own breath
Calls of help seem to fade
lying in your casket of jade

Always there will be death
followed by a stalker of shade
trying to avoid the past you've made

Beyond the fence
there is no light
Yet everything seems much too bright....


Luckily I have a few (like 20) poems stored on my computer, as well as like, five stories.
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Dreams of Flames Come Once More
And All I Am Is Distant Folk Lore
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« Reply #4 on: December 11, 2006, 12:34:36 PM »

Born Anew

"Any one out there, "she cries out.
No one to help her up or even down.
She tries to hide but it's no use,
she's always found.
They come swiftly in the night in her dreams.
Dreams of woe and sorrow.
Somehow she knows that deep within her past
something still haunts her.

It is dark, wet, and cold.
No comfort in sight anywhere.
A strange voice somehow keeps calling to her.
She doesn't understand.
She doesn't know.

"What is going on? Where am I, "she asks to
herself and only to herself.
By now her eyes are wide open and her ears are
full.
The confinement of her situation is soothing to her
and yet not.
Still yet the voice from somewhere is still lingering
nonstop and still more to come.
All she can do is try to think of her past and there
is none.
Except for a faint glimmer of a strange face.

This face can not be replaced and she knows this.
She doesn't know whom it is.
Till one sudden moment after countless times she
remembers.
It is a lost love from her past.
From another lifetime, space, and world.
She knows now this face that haunts her is her one
and only love that she was parted from in death.

She cries nonstop, praying and wishing she could be
back with this face.
All of a sudden something happens and she feels a push
and a tug at the same time.
The face of her love slowly disapears.
"No, "she cries, "no".

A bright light takes place of the face of her lost yet found
love.
Strangers are looking down upon her.
She begins to cry, she was born anew.
Forgetting her lost love from her past never to remember
or see it again.
She is part of a new world, life, and era now.
She is a baby.



(Sorry I know it's a bit long. But I hope you enjoyed it).
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« Reply #5 on: December 18, 2006, 12:55:22 PM »

The Torn Love

He looked at her, staring into her deepest soul.
She sighs knowing all is well.
The love they share is bountyful and never ending.
It seemed as if time stood still for all eternity for them.
With love flowing through every corner of themselves
all the outside world didn't happen.
The is no smell, no sound, not even a cry.
Only the cries of their hearts remained at last.

The years deminished into month, weeks, days, hours,
minutes, and finally into seconds till all was done.
As their atoms were torn apart little by little they loved.
Not only with their minds, hearts, and souls, but also
with their bodies.
Till there was nothing left but a faint whisper of "I love
you".
And that was soon gone forever for all eternity.
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Don't walk in front of me,
I might not follow.
Don't walk behind me,
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Walk beside me and be my friend.
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« Reply #6 on: December 19, 2006, 09:55:42 AM »

Lovers Torn Apart


They look down upon him as he cries.
The brightness from their rays shines
all around with no fault.
He wonders why it is as it is.
Only the sounds of a whisper is heard
in the light.

Her body lies limp in his arms without
even a twitch of hope.
It all went so suddenly, their love.
The stars of the night made him see
how she went.
Terrible thing happened as he watched
with no help.
He couldn't help, he was bound.

Blood streams all around with the
reflections of the stars looking up at him.
He looks within them stars and stares.
Looks of pain so deep to compare.
"I should have been the one," he thought
to himself hoping the stars could hear.
But the evil ones wanted her body and
they got her.
Even before he had the chance to have her
himself in love.

With her limp body he lays her gently down.
Up high he lifts a sharp dagger and plunges
it deep within his heart.
As he falls to his death his love wakes to see
him fall.
She was not as he thought, dead.
The heavens above had not had her in their
sights.
She now holds him close as she looks up.

They look down upon her as she cries.
The brightness from their rays shines all
around with no fault..
She wonders why it is as it is.
Only the sounds of a whisper is heard in the
light.

His body lays limp in her arms without even a
twitch of hope.
It all went suddenly, their love.
The stars of the night made her see how he
went.
Terrible things happened as she watched with
no help.
She couldn't help, she was bound.

Blood streams all around with the reflection of
the stars looking up at her.
She looks within them stars and stares.
Looks of pain to deep to compare.
"I should have been the one before I had the
chance to have him myself in love," she thought
as she slowly walks away.
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Don't walk behind me,
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Walk beside me and be my friend.
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« Reply #7 on: April 19, 2007, 09:02:45 PM »

wow....those are great
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« Reply #8 on: May 02, 2007, 12:33:46 PM »

Thank you Soul.

I have a lot more of mine and my daughter's (Scribe) I can post. I just haven't cause not a lot of people has read my stuff on here so I was waiting for more responses (good or bad) before I post more.

Again thank you Soul my friend.
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« Reply #9 on: July 21, 2007, 10:21:11 AM »

i suck at poetry, but every now and then i get lucky
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« Reply #10 on: August 01, 2007, 08:27:07 PM »

hey that poem sounded a lot like shakespeare
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« Reply #11 on: April 22, 2010, 07:42:46 PM »




Darkness lingers all around as the hands of time have stopped.
Cool breezes flow past causing a chill to her flesh.
Loud beats rings in her ears that can be felt within.
This doesn't overshadow the sorrow in her heart.





This isn't done yet will finish later (soon) so keep a look out for it to be finished.
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